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Crying for your merciful help！
All respected sir/madam,
I am zhangsan ,a pathetic and hard-working butcher who is 58 years old ,from Hunan Province ,Chenzhou City.
Last month, when I was killing a pig ,all of a sudden ,I fell onto the ground unconsciously.At this moment ,my wife hurriedly sent me to see a doctor .Unfortunately ，the doctor told me that I suffered from lung cancer ,which was in late stage.
And the doctor reminded me again and again,”If you don’t take a timely and overall treatment,you will die within one and half years!”
But worse still, I have little money ,which is radically enough for my treatment in the hospital,for the treatment expense is tremendously high beyond my ability.
So ,here I am crying for your merciful help!
My bank account is :11919 119119 20120120.
Thanks a billion for your mercy again!
God blesses you!
Zhangsan
2011-4-3
我給人寫的演講稿
Environment is my top concern
Nowadays ,with the fantastic spurt of science and technolody,people worldwide are now live in a terrifically wonderful world of unprecedent prosperity!
Here ,I cannot help asking :what is your top concern in your deep heart ,from now on?
Your pocket?
Your lover?？
Your shares jumping up and down？？？
No！
As for me , my top concern is nothing more than the environment,a great presence bound up with all living creatures on our unique planet!!
As we can see,we now live in a progressively thriving world.However,we still are threatened by so many new rising serious problems at the same time!
Now ,let me take the booming tourism for example please! On the one hand, tourism, as one of the most promising industries in the 21st century, provides people with the great opportunity to see everything there is to see and to go any place there is to go. It has become a lifestyle for some people, and has turned out to be the driving force in GDP growth. It has the magic to turn a backward town into a wonderland of prosperity. But on the other hand, many problems can occur unexpectedly!
And the environmental problems rising from tourism are getting even worse than ever before!
In some districts，the environment has been largely contaminated：millions of tons of wastes are pouring into the environment alarmingly;the deforestation are still proceeding;the conservation areas of wild animals are disturbingly declining ……As a result ,the contradiction of the native people and wild lifes is deteriorating,so much so that the number of the people compelled to see a doctor are increasing tremendously!
At this point,it is high time that we adopted all possible and effective measures to cope well with this problem ,so as to make ourselves live in harmony with our environment!
So ,are you still hesitating?Let’s go hand in hand to make all things go right!
我給你談?wù)勗鯓訉懽魑陌?br>寫作是本人的老本行！！六級(jí)作文115，我的英語老師多次在班上向同學(xué)推介我的作文，我的作文沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，有很多高級(jí)詞匯。在這里跟閣下分享下吧
對(duì)于作文，我說的最多的就是：不走尋常路！你不要以為在網(wǎng)上下載那些所謂的優(yōu)秀作文，拿來背背，你就成為高手了，其實(shí)大錯(cuò)特錯(cuò)！因?yàn)槲铱戳酥笠灿X得一般，甚至有些拙劣，嘩眾取寵的味道，比如有的所謂優(yōu)秀作文竟然還用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 這樣低等的寫作詞匯，說它低等，那是因?yàn)檫@些詞匯已經(jīng)廣為人知，閱卷老師已經(jīng)看的麻木不仁了！
要寫出高人一等的作文，我覺得并不難，只要你有一定的語法基礎(chǔ)和一定量的寫作詞匯（越高級(jí)越好），寫作句型，就足可以應(yīng)對(duì)常規(guī)的高考，四六級(jí)考試……（我記得高中25分滿分的作文我可以保持在21-23這個(gè)級(jí)別，四六級(jí)的作文都是110多分）
首先是語法，在你的語法達(dá)到一定層次之后，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點(diǎn)，讓已經(jīng)有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番！
其次，是詞匯，我覺得，在你的語法達(dá)到基本不會(huì)出錯(cuò)的程度上，作文便應(yīng)該以詞匯取勝，因?yàn)樵谶@個(gè)層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什么變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞匯！給你打個(gè)比方吧，很多想到“許多”就用many，但是你別忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“專家”就寫expert，但很少人會(huì)想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅長(zhǎng)”這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級(jí)的表達(dá)法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現(xiàn)在這些細(xì)微的差別上！
再次，是怎么將文章潤(rùn)色，從而使你的文章大放異彩！！關(guān)于這方面，我覺得我自己使用最多的，也是我自創(chuàng)的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下幾個(gè)方面：盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞，在介詞短語中加入適當(dāng)?shù)男稳菰~和副詞，在過去分詞前加入副詞，在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……，總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個(gè)好處，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最后，我建議你，平時(shí)讀報(bào)，或者做題的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)有好的句子好的詞匯，你要抄下來，長(zhǎng)期下來，你的作文會(huì)有提高的，需要說明的是，這個(gè)提高過程可能很緩慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保證在21-23這個(gè)級(jí)別，靠的就是對(duì)語法的熟練掌握和積累了許多較高級(jí)的詞匯，句型，句子。